Persuasive Writing

Here is my persuasive writing that I have been working on for the past few weeks.

Animals Shouldn’t be in Enclosures

Animals, animals, animals. Why can’t we all just be like all animals, and be wild? Because not all animals in the world are wild. If they can’t be free then why can we. We are animals too. When are they going to have the same rights as us. I am now going to tell you why I think that animals should never be kept in zoos or held captive.

Hunting, being in a group, natural things like this cannot happen in an enclosure. All of these things are things you think about when you hear the word ‘wild’ you think about running, being free, doing anything you like but think, these animals cannot do this because of some cruel humans who take them away from the world and never return them.

Animals are lot like humans have you realised. We need the same things to survive food, water and shelter. Most people know that, that is why you normally get a pet right? Because you think you are doing the right thing, but one thing you didn’t think about is, what if you were taken to a strange place where you don’t recognise anything but what you were brought there with wouldn’t you be scared and feel alone and trapped. That is what they probably feel like.

Have you ever realised that animals have their own minds and their own lives to live. Well did you know that animals are actually really smart and creative creatures like birds building their houses in trees out of sticks and how naked mole rats make their house underground and they don't die of being frozen to death.

Once again just to tell you once more, I believe that animals should never ever be kept in cages, enclosures and or held captive.