Thursday, 10 April 2014
Character Writing
For the past few weeks we have been working on our character writing and I have finally finished mine and Miss Kay thought it was so good she gave me a REACH award. Here is my writing about my big sister Rachel:
My wonderful big sister kind and caring and not always daring. All of my actions somehow relate to her, whether its dancing or smiling or being happy. She is always happy somewhere inside, even if she is gloomy. Rachel is now at Massey University studying for a degree in vet science so she isn’t always home which is sad.
She has hazel brown hair which is around shoulder height. Her eyes are a perfect dark brown colour. My sister is quite tall for her age she is even taller than my mum and my dad. She smells like fresh flowers, that have just been picked in spring. You will normally spot her in shorts and a t-shirt or a t-shirt, cardigan and jeans.
My wonderful big sister kind and caring and not always daring. All of my actions somehow relate to her, whether its dancing or smiling or being happy. She is always happy somewhere inside, even if she is gloomy. Rachel is now at Massey University studying for a degree in vet science so she isn’t always home which is sad.
She has hazel brown hair which is around shoulder height. Her eyes are a perfect dark brown colour. My sister is quite tall for her age she is even taller than my mum and my dad. She smells like fresh flowers, that have just been picked in spring. You will normally spot her in shorts and a t-shirt or a t-shirt, cardigan and jeans.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful piece of writing, I'm so impressed! Your writing has improved a lot, well done! Thank you for writing about me, Ruby.
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